ok i was bored and alittle angry at past events when i wrote this please tell me what you think!!!
Dealings....
she crys
and dies
mixed emotions
built up inside
blast the wall
with hateful words
a war against the fuedful birds
drizzles out to after-lude
death theats and backstabs
ment to hurt but
only sads life its self in a hurry
all mixed up with anger and fury.....
<3lily
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very nice
deep and twisted.... but nice. it shows your emotion and exacly how you were feeling. it's nice to have the ability to express the way you feel in a poem!!! beautiful! can't wait to here more!
I agree with abalonia1980. - deep and twisted...but nice
Good job liferness.
I love it
It reminds me of myself whenever I get such feeling and emotion running through me and I try and write it out, it comes out with haste passion and truth and thats exactly what this is.
thanks :))
rwal skill. if u write more often, itll be better..ot that this one want great.